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My fingertips gently caressed the damp, cracked wall. Something about this house wasn’t right. The old wooden floorboards let out a ghastly creek as my feet walked cautiously across them. I didn’t know what I was looking for or even why I came here in the first place but something about this place was entrancing. As I wandered further into the darkness; uncertain what it had in store for me I began to wonder just how long I had been walking in this unchanging corridor. That’s when I came to a door I looked up seeing a sentence etched in Latin reading Spriedums dienā. I twisted the rusty handle and with some effort it opened. Although there wasn’t much light there was just enough to see. I pulled a candle out of the holder on its stand to take a closer look around. I knelt down on the cold floor, looking at a perfect arch made from stone which was now corroded from age. There was a long empty space and as I moved the candle deeper into it that is when I realised exactly where I was. Catacomb. I hurtled backwards in shock shuffling back as far as I could, until I hit something. I slowly turned my head and froze I wished I hadn’t been so foolish as to come here.

A felt a cold hand grasp my wrist. I flinched in pain whimpering slightly as I was yanked to my feet and spun around. I gazed at his face, thirst in his eyes and an almost agitated look. “You shouldn’t have come here.” He said. I looked at him in confusion as he let out a smirk showing off a pair of perfectly formed fangs. I tried to run but he had me cornered.

He pulled me closer to him and tilted my head up. I shivered as I felt his warm breath on my neck. My heart raced as I felt his teeth sink into my neck. Pain shot through my body my vision got hazy then everything went black.
©2009 ~Kady-Chan
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I got bored and i was practising for my English exam :)
Vampire/Romance

Please comment
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:iconhighpowerz12:
Love it. That was really good. OMG I love the ending.
:iconbethi-himekunoichi:
I LOVE IT.
I am BLATES that Vampire.
Coz i'm obvs Male.
xxx

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Team Edward : Cause Werewolves don't Sparkle
"Let's Be Mimes."
I'm not the Girl your Mother warned you about, her Imagination was never this Good.
:iconkady-chan:
Lol Beth is OBVS a very sexy male vampire : )
xD
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'Call Me King' XD << Tama-Chan >>
Bilvy.
My Manlyhood Is Offended XD
:iconkady-chan:
Thanks xxx :)

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'Call Me King' XD << Tama-Chan >>
Bilvy.
My Manlyhood Is Offended XD
:iconbethi-himekunoichi:
Edward Cullen/Lestat AIN'T GOT NOTHING ON ME.
xxx

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Team Edward : Cause Werewolves don't Sparkle
"Let's Be Mimes."
I'm not the Girl your Mother warned you about, her Imagination was never this Good.
:iconkady-chan:
OFC. You win even against Edward Cullen and Lestat < Now that's saying something XD
xxx

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'Call Me King' XD << Tama-Chan >>
Bilvy.
My Manlyhood Is Offended XD
:iconbethi-himekunoichi:
YAY-HHH, BABY.
xxx

--
Team Edward : Cause Werewolves don't Sparkle
"Let's Be Mimes."
I'm not the Girl your Mother warned you about, her Imagination was never this Good.
:iconrabukurafuto:
Oh, chills! Seriously, I got chills from reading this. The fact that nothing was explained made it a nice little slice of a nightmare. The picture really adds to the story. I especially like how the narrator's gender was unspecified. That raises some interesting images...

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私是絡奇妙王!
:iconkady-chan:
Thanks :)
xxx

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'Call Me King' XD << Tama-Chan >>
Bilvy.
My Manlyhood Is Offended XD

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